Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Adding Detail to Sentences

Room thirteen have been learning about how to write a great story. One of the things to make a good story is to add detail to your sentences. Miss King told us to get a partner then she gave us three words to end with. Here are some of me of me and my partner's sentences.
The inventor invented a spaceship to go to the moon.
Who invented the spaceship? A monkey called Hairy.
The monkey gathered the tools to invent a spaceship to help him turn the moon into the shape of a monkey.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Gloria,
    I like how you've explained what you were learning to do. You and your partner have done a great job adding detail to your sentences. Keep up teh great work on your blog.

    From Miss Lavakula and Room 9