“Be home at midnight my darling” instructed The Fairy Godmother as Cinderella climbed in to the coach.
"Where are you going?" the Prince asked as the clock struck midnight. "I have to go, I am sorry" shouted Cinderella, stumbling down the palace stairs.
“You’ll never go to the ball” screamed the ugly step sisters while dressing for the ball. “But I have been invited too” sobbed tearful Cinderella as she tired a ribbon on one of her step sister.
“Will you marry me?” asked the prince, hoping for her to say yes while on bended knee.”Oh yes. I love you” exclaimed Cinderella while falling into the Prince’s arms.
Hi Gloria,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing. I liked how you've used lots of really descriptive words to add more detail to your writing. Your picture looks great too. I hope you're enjoying your netbooks and I look forward to seeing all your posts.
Love Miss Lavakula
Hey Gloria
ReplyDeleteYou have some descriptive words there and I really love your picture it is very very beautiful!
KEEP IT UP!
From Asena!
Hi Gloria
ReplyDeleteWhat a interesting Cinderella story you wrote. I like the ending bit. I also liked your picture to. You are so tellinted.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!
From your best friend Quziyah.