Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Subject Poem About New Zealand and Tonga

Strong All Blacks
Unique Red Pohutakawa
Smooth green stone
Kiwi Warriors
Fierce Haka
Land of the long white cloud
Maori Culture
Te reo Maori
Tall Skytower

Sparkling Crystal Water
Powerful Giant Waves
Deep Sandy Beaches
Hot Summers Day
Starry Starry Night
Honey Sweet Coconut Juice
Syrupy Ripe Mangoes
Speckled Watermelon
My Culture


  1. Hello Gloria,
    I just wanted to write and say a big thank you for talking with me yesterday about your blog and all your learning. I was so impressed with your school and the way all the children greeted us as visitors to your school. Looking through your blog I can see you take a great deal of pride in producing a very high standard of work. What a great role model you are for the younger members of your school community.
    Thank you again for giving up some of your learning time to talk to me.

    Kerry Guise from Wanaka Primary School.

  2. Hi Gloria,

    you have really got a good piece of writing you, I really like your Tongan Poem, but the thing you need to work on is you need do more writing.

    Keep up the good work.