tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5540427006945453644.post3379320137512936596..comments2023-06-17T00:57:56.454+12:00Comments on Gloria: PicnicPES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5540427006945453644.post-60545349067157472162012-03-05T14:35:22.023+13:002012-03-05T14:35:22.023+13:00Hi Gloria,
NIce story about the picnic. I wasn'...Hi Gloria,<br />NIce story about the picnic. I wasn't able to go. It sounded like lots of fun. A lot of people said that the picnic was great fun. I think that your writing needs a bit of fixing up in some places. Keep up the Great Work.<br /><br />ShoalShoalhttp://pesshoalm.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com