tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5540427006945453644.post275776265403704613..comments2023-06-17T00:57:56.454+12:00Comments on Gloria: The Little Old Lady - Writing Sample Term 2PES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5540427006945453644.post-89747314669899666802019-04-30T17:54:14.323+12:002019-04-30T17:54:14.323+12:00Holy smack Gloria, this story scared me! The endin...Holy smack Gloria, this story scared me! The ending caught me completely off guard. There were some scrumptious and delectable words in this story that really captured the essence of what I feel you were trying to portray. I rate 10/10. You should use this for your year 13 writing portfolio. Outstanding work! Maiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11986369749210686934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5540427006945453644.post-33940933756273102912014-06-30T19:06:53.665+12:002014-06-30T19:06:53.665+12:00Creepy! But a very good story with descreptive and...Creepy! But a very good story with descreptive and interesting language. I loved it! Theanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5540427006945453644.post-74685371704007330792014-06-19T00:23:11.092+12:002014-06-19T00:23:11.092+12:00Wow Gloria, I love the way you set and described t...Wow Gloria, I love the way you set and described the scene leaving subtle hints along the way for your audience as to what might be in store for them! Lots of juicy words and great phrasing, well done!<br />I'm definitely looking forward to more!<br />Mrs NuaToni Nuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06403667208848431253noreply@blogger.com